I have seen revolution.
I have seen
the smiles;
I have seen
the tears.
I have seen
the joy of being reunited;
I have seen
the fear of being torn apart.
I have seen
the exhilaration of learning something new;
I have seen
the vacancy of an empty mind.
I have seen
the gardens growing tall;
I have seen the
soil ravaged, depleted.
I have seen
the love and comfort of a family;
I have seen
the horror of brother striking brother.
I have seen
the elation of freedoms granted;
I have seen
the anguish of privileges revoked.
I have seen
the praise of a beloved leader;
I have seen
the muffled cries under a ruthless tyrant.
I have seen
the beauty of a thriving spirit: growing, maturing;
I have seen
the writhing pain of a starving child, neglected spirit.
I have seen
the opportunities of physical and mental health;
I have seen
the blank stare of the sick, past the edge of hope.
I have seen
the confidence of a sure path;
I have seen
the turmoil of an uncertain life.
I have seen
the leisure granted by technology;
I have seen
the looming threat of an unmanned drone.
I have seen
the tenderness of a generous soul;
I have seen
the cruelty of self-indulgent disregard.
I have seen
more than I can understand;
I have seen too little yet to answer all of the questions.
Nice poem, Katie. Once I saw that every line began the same, I skipped reading the first part of the lines and just read the poem down the right 2/3 of the page. I would suggest making stanzas out of this poem, and only using "I have seen" once in each stanza. For a tougher challenge, use the phrase "I have seen" only twice; once in the beginning and once in the end. For example, your last lines could read, "I have seen more than I can understand, yet too little to answer all of the questions." Great job.
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